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src/pages/astral/index.md

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 title: The Astral Plane
-description: TBD
+description: An overview of the astral plane.
 date_pub: 2023-02-15T00:26:00-05:00
 section: astral
 content_type: feature
 short_code: a1
 ---
 
--   Vast, impossibly large, possibly infinite in scale
--   Looks like a boundless, open sky, the color of dark purple
--   Filled with clouds of swirling, brightly-colored psychic vapor
--   Distant arcs of light (and dark) cascade across the sky
--   Everything appears to have a vague, silvery sheen to it
--   Gives off a perpetual twilight
--   Known as "the swirling void", or "boundless infinities"
--   Air feels thicker than on most material planes, and has a vague scent of chocolate
--   Subjective gravity (for intelligent creatures)
+The Astral Plane is an impossibly large, unfathomably vast plane, which is believed to connect to every other plane in the multiverse.
+
+-   Rumored to be infinite in scale.
+-   Looks like a boundless, open sky, the color of pinkish-purple.
+-   Filled with sporadic clouds of swirling, brightly-colored psychic vapor.
+-   Distant arcs of light and dark energy occasionally cascade across the sky.
+-   Everything appears to have a vague, silvery sheen applied to it.
+-   Gives off a perpetual twilight, bright enough to read, but still much dimmer than daylight.
+-   Known as "the swirling void", or "boundless infinities".
+-   Air feels thicker than on most material planes, and has a vague scent of chocolate.
+-   Subjective gravity for intelligent creatures, who can "choose" which direction to fall.
 
 ### More Info
 
 -   [Adventuring](./adventuring.html)
--   [Factions](./factions.html)
+-   [Factions](./factions/index.html)
 -   [Monsters](/bestiary/index.html)
 -   [Timeline](./timeline.html)
 -   [Vessels](./vessels.html)
-
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--   [Zenpus Cove](./zenopus-cove.html)
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+-   [Xynohpus Cove](./xynohpus-cove.html)
+    -->